What I liked

I loved Abbakka, especially early in the book and towards the end. I know the criticism of her characterization is centered around the idea that she plays into the “not like other girls” trope, but I didn’t find that to be the case at all. Her sister was prepared for statecraft and Abbakka was supposed to stay by her side as her protector, maybe her general one day. I also loved her connection to Matanta, the Guardian of the Adaiman. 

What was meh

The plot twists were unfortunately obvious from the beginning. The way events unfolded made it clear who was the blame for what and the pieces were put together long before Abbakka did which made the middle of the book harder to get through. I wish she had paced it a little better since the middle felt long and slow compared to the beginning and the end. 

What was…[Spoilers]

Fighting sea creatures with fire…as revolutionary as florals for spring, and yet it took them the entire book to figure out how to do it.

Overall, heavy but so necessary

Once Nisha starts connecting to her powers, she dances to unlock memories of previous generations of women who wielded it and the commentary continues throughout the years. I recently saw Vaishnavi Patel’s social media post on her showcasing the dances Nisha does and they do appear wholly powerful and entrancing. I loved that element of Nisha’s character arc. I also loved the running dialogue on the south asian community and not just the faults with it but also the strength in it. Even though the “aunties” and “uncles” are initially quite one-dimensional, it was nice to see them develop more throughout the book. Nisha’s mom was definitely a star.

However, there were moments where the story felt repetitive, flat and slow. There were some obvious plot points that, as a reader, seemed should have been resolved faster given the information we had.

  • Aeschylus’ Oresteia
  • Euripides’ Iphigenia at Aulis and Electra
  • Sophocles’s Electra
  • Homer’s Odyssey